I like these contrasting moments - one almost frustrating then comes something sweet.
This is very good, I love the ending (of course I do). You did great!!!!
That is so beautiful..A child can make frustration disappear wit her unconditional love...
Oh, yes! You've captured it - the best gift for any mom is that precious phrase!
Great! From one end to the other - a nice take on the prompt. Love it!
Those last few words are the greatest gift a parent can get! Loved it.
Awesome.I hate to say it, but I've yet to join the Writer's Island. I'm watching it, though.
You are a haiku wizard!!!!Great writing missy.xoBlue
what a nice gift to read...
very nice. you have gifted me with a smile.
and such a gift that last line is, especially when we are caught in the mundane... makes your heart melt...
The poem is lovely. You've crafted it so well that we the readers are just as surprised by the last line as you are of the statement. Sweet and simply beautiful.
oh may not really relate to all the love, but still it strikes me really good.I am sure you and any mom would love that right.
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